Okie dokie, so this piece did well in class thought the teacher mentioned it might be easier to read from a vertical lay out. With all the frames leading to the bottom. It was a tough one since we had to design a page layout that we had never seen before ourselves. (This is experimental comics class) So I was trying to focus on that part while still keeping an interesting subject.
This was the result. Does it make sense to you.. you might think it does. BUT THERE'S A TWIST!